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Old April 25, 2001, 23:54   #1
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Comments on A Stepdaughter of Gaia

OK, I know it's old (sheesh, it's almost 2 years since I penned the first chapter, under the name Gayle Storm)

Got 16 chapters written and posted back then, then got a new computer, and lost the game/mapfile I was working on, then lost the Gayle Storm pseudonym from Apolyton and dithered and gave up.

But, since I've started developing scenarios for gameplay, I thought "Why not recreate it, then play the game onwards?" and voila, chapters 17 and eighteen are done and the story is developing nicely.

So to refresh your memories - and for the new readers who weren't perusing the Boards back in summer 1999 - here over the next few days are the first chapters.

Comments, as always, welcome.

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Old April 26, 2001, 13:50   #2
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I love it. I think it's absolutely fantastic, and I wish I could write that well.
I look forward to the next chapter!
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Old April 26, 2001, 14:43   #3
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Thanks for the kind words, SMAC Fanatic.

In rsponse, I've put another couple of chapters in the thread



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Old April 26, 2001, 18:57   #4
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Good stuff as always Googlie. Keep it coming

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Old April 26, 2001, 20:56   #5
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Hey! I remember this one! Great work Googlie.
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Old May 4, 2001, 10:28   #6
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Alynzia on your story: !
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Just wandered over here for the first time the other day, and had a look at it - absolutely riveting stuff Googlie, keep up the good work!
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